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You
are the only admissions consulting firm to underwrite
your work with a money-back guarantee. Why is that and
how do you do it?
We do this because we have absolute faith in our
product. We also have a lot of experience � which we put
at your disposal � certainly enough to have a very keen
idea of what each candidate�s chances really are. The
money-back option is a specific program that you can
choose (we sign on it), which allows us enough time to
really make a difference to your file, essays,
references, and interview. So if we think you have a
reasonable shot, and you let us help you, and you put in
the work too, and you apply to at least four schools,
we�re 100 percent confident you won�t get dinged. If you
do we refund in full.
I
can get essay editing on the Web for 99c per 1,000,000
pages from sweetalkessays.com. Why should I come to you?
There are many cheap editing services around. Some are
clear charlatans, but others are okay. What they don�t
have, and what you almost certainly need if you are on
this site, is an editor who understands what works in
MBA admissions. Getting text correct is not so hard.
What�s hard is understanding your value profile and
communicating it to MBA admissions officers through the
set questions, and getting the essays to dovetail with
your file, references, and interview. A text-editor
cannot take you there.
Okay, I get it that I need a specialized admissions
consulting-editing service. Still, why are you different
from other admissions consulting or essay editing firms?
We focus only on the MBA. We�re specialists. If you want
to go to law school or med school, etc., we send you to
consultants better than ourselves. But for top-tier MBA
admissions, this is the place. We all have admissions
experience at the most selective business schools and
are either MBAs or professional editors with a
background and training in the MBA process. For more on
what�s different between us and the rest, see
Why We're Different.
You
make a big deal of profiling. What is it and why do I
need it?
The Greek Oracle at Delphi said �know thyself� and
that�s the single key to admissions. If you know who you
are and where you�re going, and why it requires an MBA, you�re
already halfway to getting in. Our profiling tool is a
quick and effective way to achieve this basic
self-knowledge. We assess your strengths,
weaknesses, achievements, preferences, goals,
motivations, etc., which becomes the basis of your essay
and interview content. If you don�t do adequate individual personal
profiling, you�ll end up sounding like a generic
candidate. Ding.
You
don�t say you have particular experience with any one
school. Why not?
Actually we do have insider experience with a number of
the top schools. But, first, our admissions strategy is
strongly to focus on the candidate not the school. In
our experience candidates get bent out of shape by
trying to second-guess �what Stanford needs� or �what�s
hot at Kellogg,� etc., and often neglect to say who they
really are and where their own strengths lie. In fact
all schools are looking for a mix of strong candidates
of all types and backgrounds (to achieve class balance).
Therefore their requirements are so similar as to be
identical for all practical purposes. If you get your
profile right you can get in anywhere.
Second, we know, and you should know, that claims to
insider school knowledge is mostly marketing hot air.
Currents move quickly in MBA admissions, so any
consultants claim to past admissions committee
experience is of very little consequence. All to say
that the attempt to �inside-track� a particular school
is redundant, futile, and possibly harmful to
the candidate.
Do
you just help with essays, or do you actually write
them?
The MBA Studio wholly endorses the ethics of MBA
admissions: a candidate�s essays must be their own work.
We don�t do it for you. Having said that, every athlete
has a coach, and every film star has an agent. We will
absolutely coach you, advise you, troubleshoot for you,
and guide you every step of the way. Everything we do is
by way of suggestion. You retain full ownership and control.
Do
you sell sample essays? If not, why not?
We do not traffic in sample essays. Samples can be good,
if used in the right way (as a learning tool.) So we are
happy to send you
for free
good samples of
excellent and shoddy essays. But we do not suggest you
use these essay as any sort of �model�. Firstly there�s
the possibility that Adcom will directly recognize the
essay, and therefore your plagiarism. But even if they
don�t, the language will be different and the essay will
likely not fit in with the rest of your application,
which will raise a red flag.
Second, unless you are an immensely centered individual,
chances are you will be influenced and sucked in to
mimicking the model essay that worked for someone else �
which by definition won�t work for you. Our advice is:
have a look at some examples, understand the principles
of success, then put others� work away and concentrate
on telling your own story and communicating your own
value.
What�s the difference between your per hour and per
school service packages?
There is no difference in terms of what you get
(depending which school package you take.) Generally,
you go
through the same process. Some people are more
comfortable with an hourly system they can control, some
are more comfortable knowing �what they�re in for� in
total. If you think you�re quick on the uptake and work
fast you�d be more likely to be comfortable going by the
hour. School packages offer extended support beyond any
time usage you will ever need. The choice is yours.
What
the difference between the Complete Service and the Essay
Makeover Service?
At MBA Studio we have two types of client. The first
type wants their essays checked and fixed before they
send them. They seek the quick and relatively
inexpensive
Essay
Makeover. Sometimes they take other
items they need off the a-la-carte menu. The second type
wants to build their whole admissions strategy, profile,
essays, interviews, references, file etc., into one
coherent, competitive picture from the ground up. They do
the �deep dive� full package (either per school or per
hour). The full service is longer, more thorough, and more
intensive. It takes far more of our
time and returns commensurately higher benefits to you.
How
do I know if I should be an Essay Makeover client or a
Complete Service client? Do you advise me?
Essay Makeover is for people who are sure they
understand their profile, and their core message, and
know what they want to write and how to approach the
essays to get their message across. The per-school or
hourly Complete Service is for applicants who are not
sure they understand the full extent of their value
profile, or aren�t sure how to approach the essays or
interview or references.
We can help you choose which is better for you. If you
have a ready essay or essay set, we�ll look at it.
If it�s a solid start you can build on, we�ll go
straight to Essay Makeover. If it�s not, we�ll suggest
the Profile Build and moving on from there.
Okay, assuming I sign up, for the Essay Makeover. What�s
the process?
You submit your essays or essay set via the
prices page.
These will be reviewed initially for content and
structure. We don�t do a full interview but we do ask
you to send as much background about yourself � r�sum�,
etc., so we can do a better job. Your essays will be
returned with extensive content, profile, and
structure/flow comments and advice, as necessary. This
is Round 1.
You�ll
take them, rework them, and submit them again (Round 2).
This time we will focus more on language, expression,
and style. If your essay is in good shape we�ll finish
it up there and then with a grammar check and
copyediting. Sometimes, if you essay is really good and
clean it takes only one review. Normally it takes 2-3
reviews to get it right.
In the Essay Makeover, what�s the difference between a
content-structure review (Round 1) and the style and
expression review (Round 2)?
In
reviewing an essay we first ask questions such as: Do you
answer the question? Does the essay communicate a value
point? Does it have an argument (for your value) which
follows a logical structure? Do the introduction and
conclusion work? Have you shared a distinctive memorable
attribute? Does the story you chose work in its context?
Have you been specific enough and given examples? If you
submit various essays for one school, we check that they
complement but don�t overlap each other.
Round 2
assumes the content is right, and then looks more
closely at the text. Have you briefly and clearly said
what you need to say, using clear expression and good
writing technique? Are all errors of style and grammar
cleaned up?
Assuming I sign up for the Complete Service. What�s
happens then?
The full service admissions consulting is designed to
get all parts of your file, interview, references,
essays, as good as they can be, and working in harmony.
We invariably start by asking for as much background
information as possible to be sent via e-mail, and then
we make a time for a substantial chat � of one to two
hours � by phone where we get to know you and ask you
questions about your personality, background, goals,
motivations, community service, successes, failures, etc. We�re
more interested in the human interest and stories of
your life than the bald facts and events.
When we have the basics then we will sift through them
together, deciding which parts of you to promote to
create a valuable, compelling candidate. Then we will
discuss how to �map� this profile onto the essays you
face (and get it into the references and interview.) We
don�t leave you to write until we have defined what goes
in each essay, and set up a structure and
outline for each one. This will give you clear
guidance as you write.
After that the process resembles the Essay Makeover. We
take your essay through various rewrites until it is
complete. This is all done via email, with occasional
brief phone calls, where necessary.
What�s
"essay content mapping"? That�s not a term I�m familiar
with.
If you follow our system you don�t start by answering
the questions. You start by sorting out what you should
tell Adcom. You arrive at your application message
before you look at the questions. Mapping is the process
of �painting� your message onto the essay questions so
that (a) the questions are answered and (b) your message
is transmitted.
So
we can do all this even if I�m in Geneva and you�re in New
York?
Right on. We�re in New York, with offices in
the UK and Europe.
But whether we�re working for someone in Trenton NJ, or
Osaka Japan, we actually work the same way � via phone,
email, and/or internet chat. There�s no difference, except
that, if calling from abroad to the US is expensive,
we�ll keep that to a minimum or we'll call you.
So
what does this all cost?
The MBA Studio offers various flexible options: an
hourly fee, various per hour or per school package
options, and a completely a-la-carte menu. See the
prices page. With us you always know exactly what you
are paying for and you have full control over it.
We don�t expect you do plunk down a lot of
money without experiencing the benefits of the process.
Therefore we encourage you to take advantage of our free
essay edit, or just one hour of consulting, so you can
get an idea of the value-add. Only disreputable
providers try to sucker you into a big upfront payment
based on sweet words. We don�t hard-sell you and we
don�t expect you to pay for more than one hour at a
time. (Obviously significant discounts apply when you
ready to make a bigger commitment to the process.)
What
if I want to try you out, and purchase more of your
services later?
The whole philosophy of MBA Studio is you have the power
to choose. You can do whatever you want, and play it as
your time and budget demands.
How long does it take?
Essay makeovers take 48 hours (24 hours by appointment).
A full profiling and consulting series typically takes
one to three weeks. It really depends on how fast you get
your work back to us. We don�t hold onto it for more
than 48 hours on average.
Can
I take a full service package for one school and then switch to the
per-word Essay makeover menu for the others?
Yes
How does Adcom view admission consulting, interview
prep, and essay editing. Is it �legal�?
Adcom are
totally fine with it as long as you don�t get anyone to
write the essays for you. Think of it this way: almost
everyone gets coached in the Gmat, whether through
guidebooks or Gmat prep classes or online. So the
candidate's Gmat score in no way represents the candidate�s raw
ability. Admissions consulting, interview prep, and
essay prep go by the same rules. It�s all about
what you can achieve after consulting and
coaching � just like in the business world.
What's the best way to
reach you?
The MBA Studio has presence in various locations in the
North America, Europe, the UK, and around the world.
Please email us at
[email protected]
and well find the best way to connect you.
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